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My teeth,
Long and sharp,
Run up and down your shivering body,
Gently, like playing a harp.
Long, soft strokes,
My snow white hand moves,
And grabs your head,
While my voice soothes.
I whisper calming thoughts,
Putting calming things in your mind,
With my voice and my eyes,
I hold you in a bind.
Yet that does not stop the shivering,
The fear in your face,
You do not understand,
Me, or my race.
Tempted, and temped no more,
My long-since dead heart beats,
Wanting to live again,
Wanting to taste your blood like sweets.

It is no longer I can wait,
I sink my fangs into your flesh,
Into that skin so pale with fear,
The skin of a maiden, so very fresh.
I wait for but a moment,
Until your fear turns to pleasure,
Still in my bind,
The pleasure I can measure.
Higher than sex,
But only good for one,
At least you don't have to worry,
About bearing me a son.
Your blood, filled with pleasure,
Seeps past my lips,
It's texture, it's power,
I drink it slowly, only in sips.
Strong like wine,
No, stronger still,
I continue to drink,
Until I've had my fill.

Now comes the choice,
Should I change you, or not,
Perhaps I should just leave you,
Leave you to rot.
But then, with skin so fair,
You should join me,
Not have to die right here,
Certainly not for all to see.
Loving your blood, and loving your looks,
I take my fangs away,
I lick at your neck,
My tounge having its way.
Cleaning up any mess,
And stopping further bleeding,
Your body will soon die,
Your heart leading.
I wait until your body dies,
Wait until you turn,
Now it is time,
Time for you to learn.
Hunting and surviving,
They coexist for us,
Though you have to have control,
And not give into bloodlust.

A vampire we are,
Souls we will not miss,
Just know you gave it away,
With the Vampire's Kiss.
©2007-2009 ~TheGreatDragon
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Author's Comments

Yeah... I thought this one up after reading :iconfallenpoeticlover:'s Vampire. I suggest it. Good reading, truly. Better than mine.

Anyhow, this vampire has found a woman. And he likes her. :eyes: So, he decides to taste her. And.. Oh, just read it. You'll find out. =P

P.S. Please leave a comment. >>;;

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:icondemoninsanity:
Ooooh, such a creepy and romantic poem 8D. I think. I'm no good at commenting on poems. But I like it!

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:iconvampire-soul89:
Wow, such a great usage of words ^_O I love it so much

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:iconthegreatdragon:
Well, thank you anyway. :D

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:iconthegreatdragon:
Thank you much. -Nods- But do check out the poem I suggested. It is there I got my inspiration.

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:iconfallenpoeticlover:
Your's is better than mine! I love it!!!!!!!!

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:iconvampire-soul89:
I did ^^ I would go for any vampire related poems and works...they are both wonderful poems ^^ I love them both

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Have the need to read an exicitng short novel? If you do visit my profile! I have an exiciting new novel i have written just for those vampire lovers ^^ or adventure lovers too <3
:iconthegreatdragon:
Bah, mine is not better. I like your's so much more. But, anyway, thanks. :D Always good to hear my work is appreciated. Oh, and I just thought of this without any pre-thinking, or anything like that. I just read your's and, pop, there it was.

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:iconthegreatdragon:
Good, good. ... .. Oh, and, you should know... that I don't just guess all this up. I know. .. I'm a vampire.

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:iconfallenpoeticlover:
:giggle: Well poems you don't reallly have to think about are always the best kind of poems!

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If all is fair in love and war does that mean it's legal to shoot my partner????
:iconthegreatdragon:
Yes! Poems that come from nowhere seem to be the best I write. >>;;

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